WIP: Spidey design for Mego-Eat 2013 logo

[dr_cyclops]

This is what I call an 'ink-sketch scan'. I don't do the tight pencils anymore before going to the ink pens. Now that I clean up my drawings on Paintshop, I save alot of smaller details for this stage. This image is not the complete line-work, nor does it contain any logo lettering. Critiques are best for over all concept design and not which web lines meet or not. Hope you like it.

[SeattleEd]

I'd wear that!! Bring it on!

[rche]

Make him a broken circle and I'd buy one long distance.

[dr_cyclops]

Make him a broken circle and I'd buy one long distance.

I could so do that! In the end, it's MikeMC4's choice. So, it's not me you need to convince. I realize it's possible to interpet your critique as falling under my 'web line' comment. I do not see it that way at all. Your critique is spot-on to what I am asking for: over all design. Thank you, rche.

[pmwasson]

Wow! That's great!

[SeattleEd]

Dino,

Can you do a Broken Circle one for comparison purposes?

[sprytel]

Looks good to me.

Just a thought... maybe the lettering could be in a neon bar sign?

[Iron Mego]

Shouldn't a circle suit Spidey be on a Type-1 body?

[dr_cyclops]

Shouldn't a circle suit Spidey be on a Type-1 body?

I'm stupid. I don't know.
Thank you, Iron Mego!
I swear, I could not have hoped for such great critiques so far. Just what I asked for. Please everyone, keep them coming.

[Iron Mego]

I was just playing the uber-geek, actually. I would buy this on a tee-shirt in a heart-beat. I wish I was still running my letterpress business, this would make a fun little card.

[Wise4671]

This looks GREAT!!!! How about a Mego logo on the beer mug :-)

[Remco Monster]

HAHA, holy crap is that cool! Love it!

[jimsmegos]

I really , really, really like this. Great work!

[Earth 2 Chris]

Nice! It's well done, and a lot of fun.

Chris

[dr_cyclops]

First logo design with image: