WIP: Spidey design for Mego-Eat 2013 logo

[cockyhoskins]

Love it!

[MegoSteve]

Love the drawing, but I don't care so much for the font on the logo. I'd flip the bottom half (the tagline that starts with "Pizza...") so it's facing upright instead of being upside down. I might be tempted to put the tagline up top and "Mego Eat" at the bottom just to see how that looks, too.

[MegoCapnMike]

Sweet!

[MegoCapnMike]

Love the drawing, but I don't care so much for the font on the logo. I'd flip the bottom half (the tagline that starts with "Pizza...") so it's facing upright instead of being upside down. I might be tempted to put the tagline up top and "Mego Eat" at the bottom just to see how that looks, too.

Yes, yes. I would say make that adjustment and we are good to go IMO!

[MegoCapnMike]

ooh, and maybe add "2013" to it after Mego Eat. Just in case it becomes annual...

[mikeMc6]

First off, WOW! Great job on a high quality WIP! I love how everyone has contributed constructive criticisms along with the accolades. A diamond circle would be cool as well as body type adjustment to reflect earlier issue. Love the foamy root beer and pizza. I'm off to work so I will have to pm you late tonight or early tomorrow. Thank you so much for donating your professional graphic design expertise pro bono! I would have never imagined such a cool idea when this whole concept started!

[dr_cyclops]

These critiques have been great!
The two design flaws (in the Spidey image) that bother me the most, are mine and the MM fault.
#1: The two images I used for reference were the MM tradingcard image and the photo of circle-suit Spiderman with Peter Parker. Both show T2 hands. I now understand the weird highlights on Spidey's hands are flesh colored plastic showing through the chipped red paint on the Spidey and Parker photo. Upon further research, I realize I don't have proper reference to change the hands to T1. Now before everyone starts saying they can help, it's not as easy as posting or sending photos. Even if someone sent me T1 hands, it could take weeks to get the the change to look anywhere near as accurate as these T2 hands. With the event date approaching so soon, would the loss of ad time be worth the weeks this could take?
#2: Something kept bothering me about the web circle, I thought I had research the design fully, only to realize I had reversed the web scallops on the circle. That's why the circle reminded me of a 70s flower design. I'm currently altering this.
I will also be working to reverse the lettering at the bottom of the Mego-Eat logo. More images to come!

[Iron Mego]

Don't worry about the body type, I was just being a dork.

[dr_cyclops]

Don't worry about the body type, I was just being a dork.

Iron Mego, your question was considerate and polite. The hand type issue is all the MM fault. lol I'm kiddin', dr_cyclops is learning all the time.
I'm posting here for the feedback. When everyone wanted a different suit design, it caused me to reconsider my design. That's when I hit paydirt. Just wait till you see the new circle suit design. No flowery center.

[dr_cyclops]

Here is the new circle suit design. Same old hands.

[Iron Mego]

Looks great.

[pmwasson]

That looks perfect to me!

[MegoCapnMike]

Love it!

[supes]

awesome!

[SeattleEd]

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