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The more I looked at her...I thought something was missing. I added a hatband, some additional details to her mouth, lightened her hair, and a few other highlights. Looks way more finished now.
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Much better but step away now and leave it alone --- or you'll be in danger of overkilling it.
Looks perfect just as it is now
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You're absolutely right...you gotta know when to add more, and when to stop. I very seldom revisit paintings, but this one was bugging me. Her face was centered a tad to low for all that empty black up top. The orange band really evens the composition out.Comment
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The George Lucas of paintings...."Many Shubs and Zuuls knew what it was to be roasted in the depths of the Sloar that day I can tell you."Comment
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Yeah, adding the hatband and tongue made a world of difference, she's perfect now"...The agony of my soul found vent in one loud, long and final scream of despair..." - Edgar Allan PoeComment
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Nah...I'm just playing around. You just gotta be careful when revisiting great work already completed....It actually looks better than in your first post with the add-ons."Many Shubs and Zuuls knew what it was to be roasted in the depths of the Sloar that day I can tell you."Comment
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