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  1. #1
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    My brand new awesome beautiful poem.

    Once I had a little dog
    Who turned into a toady frog
    He leaped into a marshy bog
    And sat upon a cypress log

    Tears have made my pillow soggy
    'Cause I miss my little doggie
    Frogs aren't fun, no fun at all
    They can't play fetch & return my ball

    I really hate that stupid frog
    That used to be my little dog
    I think I'll have a little fun
    And so I grab my BB gun

    Off to the swamp I run so fast
    I see that stupid frog at last
    My aim is true. I take my shot
    I kill the frog ... that used to be my little dog

    The End

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    Lovely. I cried, I laughed, I cried again.

    If you want to preserve the rhyme at the end, might I suggest the following?

    My aim is true. I take my shot
    I kill the frog that once was Spot.


    Feel free to use it. I waive my rights to all credit and royalties for when it makes you rich and famous.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sprytel View Post
    Lovely. I cried, I laughed, I cried again.

    If you want to preserve the rhyme at the end, might I suggest the following?

    My aim is true. I take my shot
    I kill the frog that once was Spot.


    Feel free to use it. I waive my rights to all credit and royalties for when it makes you rich and famous.
    Thank You, I love it!

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    Once I had a little dog
    Who turned into a toady frog
    He leaped into a marshy bog
    And sat upon a cypress log

    Tears have made my pillow soggy
    'Cause I miss my little doggie
    Frogs aren't fun, no fun at all
    They can't play fetch & return my ball

    I really hate that stupid frog
    That used to be my little dog
    I think I'll have a little fun
    And so I grab my BB gun

    Off to the swamp I run so fast
    I see that stupid frog at last
    My aim is true. I take my shot
    I kill the frog that once was Spot.

    The End

    ** Revised version. Special thanks to sprytel

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