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  • GlobalObserver
    Persistent Member
    • Aug 12, 2004
    • 2220

    My brand new awesome beautiful poem.

    Once I had a little dog
    Who turned into a toady frog
    He leaped into a marshy bog
    And sat upon a cypress log

    Tears have made my pillow soggy
    'Cause I miss my little doggie
    Frogs aren't fun, no fun at all
    They can't play fetch & return my ball

    I really hate that stupid frog
    That used to be my little dog
    I think I'll have a little fun
    And so I grab my BB gun

    Off to the swamp I run so fast
    I see that stupid frog at last
    My aim is true. I take my shot
    I kill the frog ... that used to be my little dog

    The End
  • sprytel
    Talkative Member
    • Jun 26, 2009
    • 6539

    #2
    Lovely. I cried, I laughed, I cried again.

    If you want to preserve the rhyme at the end, might I suggest the following?

    My aim is true. I take my shot
    I kill the frog that once was Spot.


    Feel free to use it. I waive my rights to all credit and royalties for when it makes you rich and famous.

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    • GlobalObserver
      Persistent Member
      • Aug 12, 2004
      • 2220

      #3
      Originally posted by sprytel
      Lovely. I cried, I laughed, I cried again.

      If you want to preserve the rhyme at the end, might I suggest the following?

      My aim is true. I take my shot
      I kill the frog that once was Spot.


      Feel free to use it. I waive my rights to all credit and royalties for when it makes you rich and famous.
      Thank You, I love it!

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      • GlobalObserver
        Persistent Member
        • Aug 12, 2004
        • 2220

        #4
        Once I had a little dog
        Who turned into a toady frog
        He leaped into a marshy bog
        And sat upon a cypress log

        Tears have made my pillow soggy
        'Cause I miss my little doggie
        Frogs aren't fun, no fun at all
        They can't play fetch & return my ball

        I really hate that stupid frog
        That used to be my little dog
        I think I'll have a little fun
        And so I grab my BB gun

        Off to the swamp I run so fast
        I see that stupid frog at last
        My aim is true. I take my shot
        I kill the frog that once was Spot.

        The End

        ** Revised version. Special thanks to sprytel

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